CAN NOT MAKE ANY MISTAKE ANYMORE. 10 points for your kindness helping me.?
PLEASE HELP CHECK MY RESUME. I MADE MISTAKE AND DID NOT GET MY DREAM JOB. I AM SO SAD, I DON'T WANT TO MAKE ANOTHER MISTAKES. THANK YOU. OBJECTIVE Succeeding in a competitive business environment in which I can capitalize on my customer service skills and strong work ethic EDUCATION Master of Public Administration Graduation: May 2008 (Human Resources Management) Bowie State University, Bowie, MD G.P.A. 3.70/4.0 Bachelor of Arts in Political Science Graduation: May 2006 Edinboro University, Edinboro, PA G.P.A. 3.21/4.0 (Completed 4-year program in 3 years) WORK EXPERIENCE Graduate Assistant to the Chair August 2006-Present Department of Management, Marketing, and Public Administration Bowie State University, Bowie, MD •Organizing conference/internship/scholarship opportunities •Managing graduate students’ official files and documents •MPA program liaison •Developing and updating department website •Broadcasting information and scheduling courses on the university databases •Conducting research for MBA program coordinator Graduate Student Worker (Part-time) August 2004-February 2008 Edinboro University and Bowie State University Sodexho, USA •Assisted the general managers in planning and organizing various restaurants on campus •Provided strong team work and support to achieve the goals of the company •Ranked highly among the team for excellent service and strong sales Intern May-August, 2005 The Royal Thai Embassy, Washington, D.C. •Assisted the Minister/Deputy Chief of Mission (International Relations) •Verified official documents (passport, visa, naturalization, and legalization) INTERNATIONAL ACCOMPLISHMENTS Featured in the Bowie State University (HBCU) viewbook and website in “Spotlight” section, Fall 2007 Organized and hosted “Women and Children in Japanese Society” Speech and Dinner, the guest speaker was the First Secretary of the Consulate General of Japan in New York, Fall 2005. Assisted the Thai Minister/Deputy Chief of Mission and organized “A Taste of Thailand” Gala Dinner, a benefit for the post-tsunami support of schools and living facilities for the orphans in Thailand, Summer 2005. Served as the Vice President of the Asia Club at Edinboro University, organized an educational trip to Harvard University and Massachusetts Institute of Technology, Spring 2004. AWARDS Graduate Assistantship 2006-2008 SILVER Academic Award 2005-2006 Julie Lieber International Scholarship 2004-2005 ASSE International Exchange Program Scholarship, United States, 2002-2003 PROFESSIONAL DEVELOPMENT TRAINING •Member of Society for Human Resource Management 2007-2008 •Website Development Training September, 2007 •OSDBU Procurement Conference April, 2007 •Faculty Research and Scholarship Training Series March, 2007 SKILLS Microsoft Office Applications (Word, Excel, PowerPoint, Outlook, Internet) Research (Collecting, Managing, Analyzing, and Presenting Data) Communication Skills (English and Thai) References, Writing Samples, and Portfolios Available Upon Request
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Don't forget, we're in a recession, so the odds are you aren't alone. Plenty of people aren't getting their dream jobs! It doesn't mean you aren't a good worker. I read your OBJECTIVE: OBJECTIVE Succeeding in a competitive business environment in which I can capitalize on my customer service skills and strong work ethic "In a competitive business environment" is a bit vague; it could mean you want to be a car salesman, a travel agent or a Starbucks manager. Here are some ideas: "in the competitive field of restaurant management" "in the competitive field of fast-food franchises" "in the field of software design" "in the field of information storage and management"
Don't forget, we're in a recession, so the odds are you aren't alone. Plenty of people aren't getting their dream jobs! It doesn't mean you aren't a good worker. I read your OBJECTIVE: OBJECTIVE Succeeding in a competitive business environment in which I can capitalize on my customer service skills and strong work ethic "In a competitive business environment" is a bit vague; it could mean you want to be a car salesman, a travel agent or a Starbucks manager. Here are some ideas: "in the competitive field of restaurant management" "in the competitive field of fast-food franchises" "in the field of software design" "in the field of information storage and management"
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