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Asked by Hope
Thank you very much for taking time out of your busy schedule to talk to me about Coordinator II at Webster University. I appreciate your time and consideration in interviewing me for this position. It was a pleasure to discuss my future with your company. I was very impressed to learn that Webster University has grown across the globe. I am excited for the possibility to help your organization continue to grow even more in the future. As I indicate, my work experience and academic background from Bowie State University support my strong interest in the position. In addition to my enthusiasm for performing well, I am willing to learn the new tasks and would bring the technical and organizational skills necessary to get the job done efficiently. I am very interested in working for you and look forward to hearing from you once the final decisions are made regarding this position. If you have any questions please feel free to contact me by phone and e-mail

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Answered by vronni
I am excited about the possibility of helping your organization... As I indicated, ... (should it be past tense?) ...contact me by phone or email. (unless you really want them to do both) When you mention your work experience, you could briefly mention just one specific item that is pertinent, to jog their memory of which applicant you are. Same when you mention the technical and organizational skills. Only briefly, though; you don't need to rehash your resume. Overall, it sounds to me like a strong follow-up to an interview.


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