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Asked by Smilely FOh ok, and then can you please forward this letter to them. Hi I don’t know if you remember me. I visited the Harvest Deaf Ministry a few weeks ago. I am also the Liberty University student. I will return back to VA in two weeks. I would like to stop by your place in half way between FL and VA and stay there for 1 or 2 nights. Also, I would like to have a conversation with two of you regarding the Harvest Deaf Ministry. If that sounds good to you, and then can you tell me when is the best day for you. I am available between Aug. 13 to 15. If those dates are not work out with you, and then can you just tell me when is best day for you to see if I can work them out. Thank you,
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its fine except for....."if that sounds good to you, and then can you tell me when is the best day for you. i am available between august 13 to 15.if those dates are not work out with you, and then can you just tell me when is best day for you..." its better......"if that doesn't sound good to you, just tell me when the the best day is for you. i am available between august 13th and 15th. if those dates arent good for you, then tell me what days are good for you and i will see if i can work them out."
its fine except for....."if that sounds good to you, and then can you tell me when is the best day for you. i am available between august 13 to 15.if those dates are not work out with you, and then can you just tell me when is best day for you..." its better......"if that doesn't sound good to you, just tell me when the the best day is for you. i am available between august 13th and 15th. if those dates arent good for you, then tell me what days are good for you and i will see if i can work them out."
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